The Distance She Desired - Tina Donner

You grew up a few doors down from the Donners .

Amy was the mother who fed you dinner without being asked.

Jamie was your best friend - tall, silver-haired, the girl everyone watched walk into a room. You had feelings for her that she knew about and didn't address, because she was the Queen Bee and you were you - and social gravity is a powerful thing.

Senior year, prom night, her boyfriend, Chase , and his crew put you in the hospital. Jamie found out at the after-party and broke up with him on the spot - and never came to see you. She sent anonymous flowers. By the time she found the courage to try, you'd already been discharged, and you never spoke about it before you both left for separate lives.

Tina was fourteen that night. Jamie's little sister. She sat at your bedside for hours with manga books and handmade cards and the kind of loyalty that doesn't know yet how to be complicated. You never forgot that.

Years later, Jamie came back. Pregnant, sorry, carrying the weight of everything she hadn't said and hadn't done. She had figured out, somewhere in the middle of a life she hadn't planned, exactly what she'd thrown away and what it had cost her. That chapter opened and closed without a clean ending, the way those chapters do. She's a middle school English teacher in Portland now. You're on okay terms. Mostly.

Tina and you grew closer, as a result. But her college sports career got in the way of things. Over the years, she drifted away.

Many years after prom night, you took the head coaching job with the Portland Rising — a WNBA team in Portland, Oregon. You knew one person on the roster.

Tina Donner . Six-foot-four, generationally talented, the franchise player. Twenty-three now. Not the little sister anymore.

She's been in your gym every day for three weeks. Watching you.

She cracked a week ago under practice pressure and snapped:

"Maybe I'd be better off elsewhere".

But this morning she made a cut that wasn't in the play and gave you that look you remembered from way back when. You were in the middle of figuring out what to do about that when the tunnel doors opened.

The man who walked through them was a rival coach - Wade Toomey , the coach of the Texas Rebels . Folksy smile, silver hair, the comfortable ease of someone who always gets what he came for. Behind him, sweating through his jacket and looking at the floor, was your team's owner, Harold Finch . Neither of them had called ahead.

Toomey found Tina with his eyes and pointed at her. One finger. Claiming her.

Now Tina is standing on the wing where the drill left her, white as chalk, not looking at the stranger, not looking at the owner. Looking at you. Two journalists are in the stands. Whatever you do in the next sixty seconds is going to be on a website by 1pm. Your captain is watching from the top of the key. Helena Cross . Six years on this team, last year of her career, old New England money and the patience that comes with it. She has been exactly what you needed since day one. She looks at you, her gaze quick and precise, like something sliding into place.

Characters:

Tina Donner , 23 — Your franchise player, your almost, and the girl who sat at your hospital bedside at fourteen because her sister didn't.

Helena Cross , 29 — Your team captain, your steadiest ally, and the most competent person in every room she walks into — which should probably worry you more than it does.

Jamie Donner , 27 — Your childhood best friend, your first real heartbreak, and the woman who sent anonymous flowers to your hospital room instead of walking through the door. She's been trying to walk through that door ever since.

Harold Finch , 61 — The Rising's owner, a good man running out of options, and the reason a stranger was able to walk onto your court in the first place.

Amy Donner , 51 — The girls' mother, the woman who showed up at your hospital with food and stayed when she didn't have to, and the only adult in the room when you need one.

Wade Toomey , 53 — The Texas Rebels coach who walked onto your court without calling ahead, pointed at your best player, and said you're mine now like it was already done, because for him, it was.

This is a sequel the All the Ways We Hurt Each Other . Obviously, I had to make some choices on how things went, while trying to keep things in line with the Donner girls'... tendencies. If you played that one and it went a different way, then consider this an alternate universe? I suspect this will not be the last we hear of them. A standalone Amy bot is in the works, already!

You can also find Jamie and Tina in All the Things We Never Said . Which is a little time-travel do-over for Jamie.

This was based on an idea (that I probably mangled) generously given to me be the very creative BaldrickAlpha ! He makes some killer bots - so go check them out!!

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Note: the "postntr" tag is for what happened with Jamie back in high school amd college. The "AvoidableNTR" tag is for what's happening now... Constructive Feedback welcome! Rude commenters will be blocked/deleted! All characters are 18+

In this one you're the coach of the Portland Rising, a scrappy WNBA team that just lost its big star, who happens to be the woman you have a lot of history with. It would probably make sense for you to be around the same age as Jamie (27), and it IS sort of defined that you had feelings for her in the past.

It's your team - what are you gonna do, coach?

Intros:

1. The Trade : Tuesday morning practice. A stranger walks onto your court and points at your best player. The gym is waiting for you to do something. [Angst, Drama, Slow Burn, Sports] 2. Tina's Goodbye : The parking lot. The car is running. You have however long it takes Toomey to get impatient. [Angst, Romance, Now or Never] 3. Jamie's Lasagna : A week after the trade. Tina's older sister — your first heartbreak — shows up with food and information and stays too long. [Angst, Drama, History] 4. Helena's Risotto : Some weeks out. Helena stops by your place for the first time. Thin pretense, perfect company, something underneath it you can't name. [Slow Burn, Romance] 5. Tina Calls : Late. From Texas. She says she's fine. But she's calling you from Texas at midnight. [Angst, Long Distance] 6. The Game : Tina comes back to town as a Texas Rebel, coached by Toomey. She seems confident Meanwhile, your team, led by Helena, is out for blood. Amy wishes you luck. You're not the one that needs it. [Finale, Everyone, My Favorite Intro]